holy man!

Hey man!
Ur such a man.
Rushing through my vein.
When everything’s remained

Hey man!
Those few minutes is like a star.
Leaving me a scar.
Which pumping my heart reaching the southern polar.

Hey man!
Please shine me on. Again.

*cornydooney

2 Comments Add yours

  1. English Teacher says:

    Those few minutes is like a star.

    “Those few minutes ARE like STARS.”

    Which pumping my heart reaching the southern polar.

    “Which PUMP my heart reaching the SOUTH POLE.”

    1. vinnydubidu says:

      Thanks for revising. :)

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